Rough Draft
The Personal Statement
I have a strength to believe in my intuition. The reason of my strength lies in the upbringing of my parents. By that strength, I will be oriented to programming development and business, and I have now studied to proceed to the field, and I decided to go to the higher level institution to learn programming skills.
When I was small I was not good at studying, and the doctor told me I was diagnosed with dyslexia and ADD. Although doctors recommend the treatment to my parents, my parents did not bring me to the doctor from the fear of receiving personality changing medicine. Therefore, I am treated as a normal person from everyone, and I try to act like so to adapt to the surroundings. My parents did not choose the treatment, I think that was to receive the condemnation from the authority and people. Both parents believe their intuition and chose the way to protect their child. I think I'm sure it was not an easy road. I think my parents had also received criticism from doctors and school, and they would be depressed to see my bad grades. They would also be concerned about my future.
My parents overcome those things and they believed their intuition to protect me. My parents were cooperative for the study, but they were uncooperative for what I really want to do. But thanks to my parents that I think I found my speciality and I have succeeded.
When I was a Junior high school I saw the YouTube video of Minecraft and I started to play Minecraft. I have studied programming languages such as Java to make the functions I sought, and also published on the Internet in addition to improvements to the original game. This game received a good evaluation from users.By the encounter I had with various people, it was a variety of experience. Through these experiences, I recognized that to extend most is to believe your instincts.
I think that not only these experiences stretched my talent. I see that the children of feeling to be likely to be deprived of their talents and confidence from doctors and authority in the same way as their own. So I think I can do something for those children. In addition to stretch their talents anyone not find it is, I'm sure very useful for the sake of the future, and society.
I'm preparing diligently for high level institution now. That acquire the field that they're good at is not only able to extend my abilities. I want activities to continue to extend the children's talent strongly. The differences of university and high school is not only get expert knowledge, We will be taught about so many things from the people who are active in society. Once in college, through communication with those people I want to learn about how take advantage of in the society more specifically their experience.
Final Draft
I have a clear dream and strength to believe in my intuition. The reason of my strength lies in the upbringing of my parents. By that strength, I will be oriented to programming development and business, and I have now studied to proceed to the field, and I decided to go to the higher level institution.
When I was small I was not good at studying, and the doctor told me I was diagnosed with dyslexia and ADD. Although doctors recommend the treatment to my parents, my parents did not bring me to the doctor from the fear of receiving personality changing medicine. Therefore, I am treated as a normal person from everyone, and I try to act like so to adapt to the surroundings. My parents did not choose the treatment, I think that was to receive the condemnation from the authority and people. Both parents believe their intuition and chose the way to protect their child. I think I'm sure it was not an easy road. I think my parents had also received criticism from doctors and school, and they would be depressed to see my bad grades. They would also be concerned about my future.
My parents overcome those things and they believed their intuition to protect me. My parents were cooperative for the study, but they were uncooperative for what I really want to do. I am disappointed that they didn't understand my speciality. But thanks to my parents that I think I found my speciality.
When I was a Junior high school I saw the YouTube video of Minecraft and me started to play Minecraft. I have studied programming languages such as Java to make the functions I sought, and also published on the Internet in addition to improvements to the original game. This game received a good evaluation from users. Also, I made community it was like a small company that mainly doing web and game design and programing as a volunteer. In that community I was leader and five to eight various ages people worked with me. As a leader I assessed their individual abilities and shared the work. Some people through this volunteer work found their speciality and got interested in design and aimed at designers. I felt much more confident to do programmer and entrepreneur as future job. By the encounter I had contact with various people and got variety of experience. Through these experiences, I recognized that the act to believe your instincts is most helps to grow my own ability.
I've been struggling with the symptoms of ADD and dyslexia ever. At school I was always made fun of by classmates because I couldn't read properly and I came to hate studying. I decided that I can't study, so I didn't try hard. Also, my friends called me an idiot, but I thought I’m an idiot too, so I didn’t care that much. Still, I have symptoms of ADD and dyslexia. But I began to do my best to study for a dream. Because I want everyone to tell me I succeed at work even I have ADD and dyslexia. Also If I succeed at work in the future, I want to take my experienceswith people who has the same symptoms as me. I'm sure my successexample, has become their motivation. Also If I have received the treatment of disease when I was small, I would have been much more focused on the study, and I would never get these kind of experience. I also want to tell this such thing on future for children who has the same symptoms as me.
I'm preparing diligently for high level institution now. That acquire the field that they're good at is not only able to extend my abilities. I want activities to continue to extend the children's talent strongly. The differences of university and high school is not only get expert knowledge, We will be taught about so many things from the people who are active in society. Once in college, through communication with those people I want to learn about how take advantage of in the society more specifically their experience.